2014년 10월 25일 토요일

first draft

                                The   Classical   Argument


Nowadays many people think that computers are more cleaver than brains. However, the fact is the human brain is more cleaver than computers. Therefore, I want find the fact of the human brain has more faculties than any other computers. My arguments are explain why brains are more cleaver than computers.

1. Brains are analogue; computers are digital.
2.  The brain uses content-addressable memory.
3.  The brain is a massively parallel machine; computers are modular and serial.
4.  Processing speed is not fixed in the brain; there is no system clock.
5.  Short-term memory is not like RAM.
6.  No hardware/software distinction can be made with respect to the brain or mind.
7.  Synapses are far more complex than electrical logic gates.
8.  Unlike computers, processing and memory are performed by the same components in the brain.
9.  The brain is a self-organizing system.
10.  Brains have bodies.
11.  The brain is much, much bigger than any current computers.


The Introduction

The human brain can control human's body and brains are much bigger than any current computers. In addition, the human brain has body and it can calculation, memorize more abstructly than any current computers. That's mean the human brain is more useful and it has more fantastic abilities than any current computer. That arugument support that the human brain is more cleaver than any current computers.

The Narration

In the narration, I'm going to explain about why the human brain is more cleaver than any current computers. then, I'm going to summerize in the introduction. The human brain can calculate their partner's DNA, separate different catagories and recognized same things, nonthless in different places or in different illumination. Therefore, the human brain is more cleaver than any current computers.

The Confirmation

I believe the human brain is more cleaver than any current computers. I'm going to explain about why I am think so. Because, the human brain can calculate their partner's DNA, separate different catagories and recognized same things, nonthless in different places or in different illumination. However, current computers are cannot do these the human brain's ability. That mean why not brains are more cleaver than any current computers.

The Refutation and Concession

Many people think that current computers are much, much cleaver than the human brain. Because, current computers can caculate more faster than the human brain and current computers can memorize more correctly and computers are memorize more than the humans brain. However, human brain is much and much bigger than any current computers. then, the human brain have body that can use computer or smart phone's memory. that mean, the human brain is more cleaver than any current computers.

The Conclusion

In my conclusion, the human brain is much, much cleaver than any current computers. Current computers are calculate more faster and memorize more correctly and  more memorize than the human brain. however, the human brain can calculate their's partner's DNA, separate  different catagories and recognized same things, nonthless in different places or in different illumination. Moreover, the human brain is much, much bigger than any current computers and the human brain have boby that can use computer or smart phone's memory.

 

 

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